Tuesday 17 April 2012

1 comment:

  1. Hannah, your evaluation is a bit disjointed.

    Q1. Begin by addressing the brief. Then discuss each task 1 by 1. Begin with the main video task. Then focus on the ancilary texts. Does your work measure up / what texts would you compare it with. I would like to see shots by shot comparisons.

    Q2. This was well structured but lacks analytical detail: Camera, editing, mise-en-scene, sound, iconography, typography, colour etc.

    Q3. This was the best part of your evaluation.

    Q4. This needs to be far more detailed. You need to evaluate how 'effectively' you used each of the tools you have listed.

    Your blog also needs a little re-organisation.

    I want to see a post with all three tasks included. The moderator should not have to search for your work.

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